moon's glow
shrouds your easy smile
your eyes tell stories
and your love, so deep
your passionate desire
naked 'neath the moon
just like bridge of sighs
moaning like grapes on the vine
sip sweet wine of love
A contest entry
- love by Melissa Gayle.
1000 points, ended December 29, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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There is a sweetness here, but for me, nothing that truly sparks and dazzles. Its good but not wowing.
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excellent
im only 13 years old but i enjoy poetry alot. I have read many poems about love but i never read one that quite like this i love it i hope you keep writing ones like this and i hope that in the near future you become succesful writing. Good luck with the contest -
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missleahe!
Hi. I really appreciate you taking your time to comment on this.
I just took 3 of my haiku and sandwiched them together.
Good luck to you also in all that you do!
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