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a strength to salute...

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Oh God

whenever I eyewitness  the sky, the moon,
the sun, the ocean, the trees, the birds
and the human

all they reminisce me , the founder
the maestro , the creator

that is you unquestionably
a strength to salute
to acclaim and to prefer for all the time

I perceive, If I do not glorify you
not honor you
do not sing a song for you

even then, you shall be my friend in need
my titleholder for all the time

and this specialty of yours
makes you unequal from us, makes you illimitable one
and the one, uppermost from all

Oh God..

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  • Judith Chandler
    January 24, 2009
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    "this specialty of yours". That's an interesting way to put it.

    Congrats on your HM.


  • Samplette gold member
    January 1, 2009

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    A gorgeous picture to compliment you wonderful words. Very well written. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Sam


  • Sonja
    December 28, 2008

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    I perceive, If I do not glorify you
    not honor you
    do not sing a song for you

    even then, you shall be my friend in need
    my titleholder for all the time

    What else one can say for this poetry of heart? Nicely done.
    ~Sonja~