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Comes Dark

How can you love me

As rains heavy soon fall

Why would you have me

When darkness shall call

 

Impending exacting

Insistent to claim

Any of reasoning

Admonishing my sane

 

Constant bereavement

Each hour passes on

Insidious malevolent

What will coercively drawn...

 

c2008 vduna

 

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  • IncompleteLullaby
    December 28, 2008

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    Wow. this is great.
    "How can you love me

    As rains heavy soon fall

    Why would you have me

    When darkness shall call"
    this really touches me thanks