through the hate the lies deception
all the anger pain depression
i cant find but one exception
to the laws that rule the world
one way to escape the horror
of a smashed and shattered mirror
even so the world seems clearer
as my hopes and dreams are hurled
nothing matters anymore
cant get in through locked up doors
darkness falls forever more
leaving me with tears of blood
cold steel chains that end in shackles
demons circling like jackals
all i hear are faceless cackles
surrounding me like cold dark flood
Author notes
just kinda abstract
i dont think it makes sense
i just kinda started writing
and this popped out
...
rock on
A contest entry
- Devastatingly Depressing. by a.changed-soul..
1130 points, ended January 5, 23 entries
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You're right, this doesn't make much sense, but it was depressing, and I did [ love ] it..very much!
"nothing matters anymore
cant get in through locked up doors"
You do need a title though..
My suggestions:
Dark Flood
Abstract Anger
Surrounding Darkness
Shattered hopes.
You don't have to use any of my titles, but you do need a title.
Thank-You for entering,
best of luck.
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