I look to the heavens for a reason; a reason for my existence.
Then I met you, and my heart fell for you without resistance.
My heart was broken into a million pieces
You did all you could scavenge, and pillage
All for my happiness.
Without you I am sure I am dead
Because every moment I am away from you I walk on thread.
You are my life without a doubt
Deep inside you know we need to let it out
You are the cure to the plague inside me;
Never question the problems I hold behind me.
You gave me love when I had none,
And baby I would die for you; standing in front of a gun.
I am deeply grateful for your love;
I will forever hold you close like a lost dove,
and I promise you I will shower you with love.
I pledge all I have to offer
My heart, my soul, my mind, my body.
Its all yours baby for the remainder of eternity.
A contest entry
- Whatever It Takes Song Prompt by stargazer..
1200 points, ended January 30, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it flow okay?
Comments
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Wow, this is really good! Keep it up!
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this is amazing! i hope one day i'll find someone who will save me, like you did.
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Thank you for your kind words.I am a lucky person, but its not because I saved her. You have it backwards. She is the one that saved me; she is my everything.
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yeah, i know she's the one who saved you and i hope i'll find someone who will save me.
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believe me you will find someone who will save you from whatever bothers you
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thank you! my life is pretty much ok, just i feel like i'll never be lucky when it comes to love. btw, thank you for the add.
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You are very much welcome
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aww... sweetheart! this is BEAUTIFUL... see i told u were good
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Im glad that you liked it baby it was all for you.
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Awe, this is such a beautiful write I love the last two line they're the best part :] overall this poem is really sweet and I enjoyed it even at 2:25 am XD and I am silly to be reading this but all your poetry seem rather interesting even in the morning anyway I love this so keep up the good work and best of luck to you with her :}
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Hehehe XD I thank you for the bold compliments. I just really hope that she enjoys it I wrote it for her. I mean I want nothing more than for her to read it, and just completely melt; you know what I mean? Its just that its the only thing I want to accomplish with it. If I can, lol but anyways thank you for your confidence it helps a lot.
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I know what you mean and don't worry she will love it :] and yeah no problem and again best of luck :]
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