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The Figure In The Shadows



I know why the caged bird sings,

it wants a fatal release.

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Bible in hand, she prays for love

as the tears drip down her tired face.
She looks at a light in the attic -

it seems so dim from where she stands,

it's almost as if it doesn't exist.

Like the Satanic Verses, his words poison,

like ricen laced razorblades to the soul;
"Beloved, I never meant to damage flesh,

upon your innocent and young arms."

Paradise Lost, purgatory preferred

than the licking flames of the Inferno.

It's the Twelfth Night she suffered alone,

in Uncle Tom's Cabin, bleeding unsaid truths,

from sacred skin sessions - he said he loved her,

but love is one of those words, like faith

that never prove themselves true.

This is Alice's adventures in wonderland,

all prettied up and ready to go; she leaves the note

shes planned for days until he leaves, to leave it on his pillow.

Running, like Angel Falls, as she whimpers out loud,

knowing life would never be the same again

and her dreams would never again be fairytale endings,

instead some sordid little game, replayed in her head.

As the call of the wild intices her; needs to survive -

she leaves the road she once knew so well.

Where the sidewalk ends, her past does too.

Author notes

The underlined words are the titles used.
Can argue I used 11, as the title is also one of the banned books titles.
Amazing what things they'll ban, isn't it? Nice idea.


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  • Grozny silver member
    May 21

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    Very good!

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    December 28, 2008

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    Wow. Just wow.
    This is brilliant. Stark imagery, the word love being like faith is subjective and effective.
    This gave me shivers.


  • inkstaind
    December 28, 2008

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    I'm pretty sure I will comment this poem again. I just wanted to say that I was a little confused by the line "she planned days until he went out, to live it on his pillow. " I wasn't sure if I was missing something or if there was a typo.

    I really enjoyed this poem. alot!


    • xxRainbowDawnxx
      December 28, 2008
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      Fixed now, if want to read it better

      • inkstaind
        December 28, 2008
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        thank you. I thought that was what it was supposed to say. I'm sorry, I just wanted to check otherwise it would have driven me crazy.

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