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One question always on my mind....

Lefty, or righty? You decide.









(Okay, now for the real question...)


*Sharp inhale* What would you say and do if I told you I want you to be with me always, wearing a ring and maybe even adopting my last name or vise-versa? (All while I'm on one knee.)





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A serious question if I may ask

I love you, Allyson!

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  • Fairysqu
    January 6
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    not Bad

    That was good for a short poem


  • CloudxAeris
    December 28, 2008
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    Wow, more and unusual comments then I have expected at that....

    Umm...being bipolar means having emotional time shifts faster and longer than most...so what do you expect, Ally? (I know your answer, don't I? )

    Umm, as for Rays remark....I know. I just thought I would be a little open about my mind...no matter how dark, desolate, and unusual it is.

    Cal, I agree with Ray And...I have.

    As for Nikii...this poem was just meant for Ally.

  • smallz101791
    December 28, 2008
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    wow zach i never knew u felt this way.....ummm would it be all right if u took my last name jk jk.....i think tipper would say yes but not at this age plus u would have to deal with her parents and u know how they reacted to her being on the computer they turned the power off to that room so just be patient


  • Calynn
    December 28, 2008
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    ask and find out instead of wondering
    cause then you won't be wondering anymore

    • smallz101791
      December 28, 2008
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      ms. scarlett u should have taken ur pic in a red hoody so it would have fit u better

  • Nickey Mouse
    December 28, 2008

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    Well I'd say a.. Zach a no I'm not Ally.But as for what Ally would say.. well a.. I really don't know what she'd say.I think she'd be shocked at first.

    And what's up with a lovie dovie poems everyone is writing lately?


    • Sealight
      December 28, 2008
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      Um.

      • Nickey Mouse
        December 28, 2008
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        All my poems are not depressing they are just not happy.And ohh I should play the lottery she is shocked because she said ummm.Now where's my cookie Zach?

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