The love of thee I'll never share
for not a thing can compare.
I will never feel such ways
and that is how it stays.
My adoration hasn't changed,
and to stop would be deranged.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (I) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 3, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is cute, very warm and loving but catchy and I like that. This reminds me of one of my favortie quotes:
"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for the truth. ~ Benjamin Disraeli"
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Bravo!
Well done, and I wish all the best to you in the contest! Keep up the wonderful writes, and I appreciate ya reading me as well.
Peace, Timothy
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Excellent
MY goodness now her eis a kick ass poem with some kick ass rhyme time to it and a hel;luva flow that really makes this a complete beautifully penned poem. I really love the over all point to this poem and your words ring true. excellent work as always and thje very best of luck in the contest
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