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Greedy Loves Company

Lonely pupil,sits in his world alone

playing cars,Queen of heart,five of spade

black ace of diamonds and red four that

show of no regret.

Problem solved as he comes closer to  secret of a play

Karma was to blame as he took advice of his mistress...

string of yellow roses tied around her waist as she told him a secret

of a note to show proof he was to blame for dread of society poverty,

no glimmer of twilight as this night provokes rain and a scar that will foreever remain.

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world, pupil, misery, mistress. dread, problem, society rain, scar,blame,note,yellow,twilight,string karma,black, red.spade,queen,glimmer,
just a few i used...

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  • Swan song gold member
    January 2

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    Excellent you got em all it looks like and from looking at the words that was not easy!!! Well done and good luck!