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Twin Conception

Missing image
Locked together within passion
in heated desire; twinge's of life
forming, grow rapidly.
Moonlight upon their souls
witnessed his creative flow
one egg splitting
in  a dynamic second.
Her gift doubled in bounty!
Lust over-coming our parents
two babies struggle,
clinging to the wall.
Tiny spirits smiling, waiting
for the clock of conception
to chime; it's their time
to push, turn, kick
until delivery.

Author notes

This what I felt looking at picture prompt....

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  • Rheea gold member
    January 7
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    I read this and was struck by it , I thought I had written my thoughts to it . you got lost in the colors . I love them too. It is earth art from the satellites you can goggle all are beautiful. You write is so free and warm I really love were you went with this.


  • islekine gold member
    January 5

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    This is a great write!

    Your imagery is wonderful...I love the last stanza!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    write on!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    don't know..

    the pic..don't care..this write is outstanding..beautifully told..