Ever fair and ever bright,
You dance away the darkling night
Its evil banished, fled away
At the coming of your day.
Angelic beauty and musical soul
Your weaving steps and heart aglow
Darkness falls, and demons flee
From song of love and will so free.
A contest entry
- Anything you Wish by thepoetssoul.
1000 points, ended December 29, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything and everything, just entertain me by Luciferschild.
800 points, ended January 27, 124 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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What a wonderful read this one is! Something in this just makes the reader, smile and think.. yes! You have got that right! Great job ! I love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Superb rhyme, and amazing flow and imagery
♥ Kathraina
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I liked the shortness and simplicity of this poem, it is simple but not to the point of losing meaning, in fact the poem had alot of emotion thank you for entering ill take a second look at this
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An enjoyable short piece ...
I think that’s why it’s so perfect due to the many times a reader can continue rereading it without losing any sensibility to the piece at all.
A wonderful description of the light of an angel ... your angel perhaps? heh ...
G. -
This is a wonderful little piece of poetry.
I love the rhyme and flow within.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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I really enjoyed the rhymes in this piece. Great flow and imagery. Loved your word choice. Best of luck in the contest.
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