I sit with you
Beneath the midnight sun,
it's soft glow filling
the void you've held for
so long.
I want to be with you
in this peaceful night world.
and with love in my heart,
we fly into the
midnight sun.
Author notes
Option 1. picture3. best of luck judging.
A contest entry
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16000 points, ended January 5, 2009, 115 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
Comments
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This is short, cute, and adorable. I like it a lot. The idea is a little too original but it is such a cute poem as well.
Best of luck
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Really Good. It felt like i was there. Amazing
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