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Rescue Me!

Outside the thresh hold I'm looking in,
  I hear his voice calling out to me.
Offering life in his paradise,
  safe in his kingdom eternally

I Stretch out my weak and withered hand
  barren and empty, my heart aches so
please take me in, for I'm dying here,
  I am so lost, with no where to go

  Lord can you hear now my desperate plea
here is my heart, come and dwell in me
open the door,  take me in dear God,
  all I desire is your  charity.

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Oh God ! please open your door and bless me with your love...Unknown.

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  • echo-ink
    February 11

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    WOWZER,
    OMGoodliness...this was so awesome,
    I know, I know...I've said that before, but this time, I really really mean it.
    AWESOMENESS


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 10

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    BEAUTIFUL

    a soft loving plea to the Father who created us all...take me in dear God, all I desire is your charity...flows so softly and lays upon the heart with peace...congrats on the trophy...well earned


  • Nickelspring gold member
    January 10

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    Such a simple and beautiful prayer. This touched me deeply (and I don't say that lightly). I think we all are lost at one point or another, so we can feel and appreciate this longing. The rhyme makes it more melodic.
    Lovely.
    KW


  • Aleczandra
    January 9
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    I really loved this write..
    Very awesome.
    Good luck


  • TankA
    January 4
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    He knows our heart but prayer keeps us closely connected. Lovely beckoning prayer.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 2

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    Amen Indeed..dear friend..I love the sentiments you crafted here bringing the depth to the search for HIM..well done..and thank you so much for sharing it with us...


  • toomysterious
    December 31, 2008

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    We are all lost and in need of rescue. Hopefully we will seek it in time. What a wonderful supplication you have written here.


  • Justified Inc.
    December 31, 2008

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    Moving

    This moved me so very deeply. I love the deepness of your poem and the heart crying out in the knowledge of the condition of separation from sin from the heart of God.
    He is so gracious and loving to take us all in......and more then that to offer himself up on the cross in order to rescue us! This poem pointed that out so well for me and created a stirring in my heart of deep gratitude and love for God.
    Thank you for writing it and sharing it.
    It was truly humble and contrite, which I know is what is so precious to our God, he will never despise......
    Love in Christ Jesus,
    Annette


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 30, 2008

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    So Uplifting!

    What a wonderful poem you have penned. All we need do is ask for His love and He will shower us with so much. A pleasure to read this afternoon. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.

    Peace and Grace,
    Sandy

  • -lk-
    December 28, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    This is such a beautiful, heartfelt plea for God. It is when we are at our lowest that we need Him the most. He is always with us and hears our humble prayers.

    A lovely entry for this contest! Best wishes!

    Blessings


  • Denerica
    December 28, 2008

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    You always captivate me! This is a wonderful cry out and with humbleness and surrender...the title...just you WOW me brother! Blessings


  • ennovy silver member
    December 28, 2008

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    Your words touched my heart in so many ways, I thought of the sick, needy people, family taking the wrong paths and your prayer enlighted me once again....what a inspirational poem...beautiful & excellent...write On!novy


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    How very beautiful and an oh so humble plea.
    Best wishes in the contest with this wonderful prayer!
    Gaylene


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    I love the poem, is a sure winner, or should be. happy holidays, thank you for reviewing me and good luck in this contest

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