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Die For You.

So alone
As you spit your words of hate
Across my vacant face,
Because I am pathetic
And I am empty.
I'll cry and cry
A million tears for you,
As you watch with disgust.
And I'll smile in my despair
Whilst I die,
Over and over
For the only love I have.

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  • flyingspur
    June 25

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    brilliant

    i see you have a few more trophies since i last visited and after reading that its no suprise...your the best and most visual dark writer about...dougie x


  • Sgt. Pepper
    March 29

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    this is a great poem
    my favourite line is

    So alone
    As you spit your words of hate
    Across my vacant face,

    creates great imagery!
    i think im will be following more of your work from now on!
    thank you for a great write
    alex


  • a.changed-soul.
    December 27, 2008

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    This was wonderful!

    I mean..I'm very sorry for what happened,

    but you did a good job expressing it...

    One problem: I had to "quick comment" this poem..because it wouldn't let me click on it..because my filter is on..so could you fix that..maybe you labeled it..Adult?

    Thanks!

    Thank-you for entering,

    Best of luck.


    • PureAmethyst
      December 27, 2008
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      Thank you.

      I'm not sure why that is happening because it isnt under 'adult' but I'll take a look.

      xXxPurexXx