A fairytale has come to me
And at last at last it has set me free
No dragons, faries, ghosts or ghouls
Just freedom to live and break all the rules
It is love that I speak of, so pure and true
Love for myself and love for you
Love for my family, love for my friends
Love has a meaning, love has no end
Love cannot shatter, love cannot break
Love can do wonders, love is not fake
Perhaps you don't agree, perhaps you think I"m foolish
Perhaps you think I'm wrong, perhaps you think I'm useless
Thats up to you to decide, whether or not you agree
But remember this my friend, love can set you free
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"Love for myself and love for you
Love for my family, love for my friends
Love has a meaning, love has no end
Love cannot shatter, love cannot break
Love can do wonders, love is not fake"
that is my favorite part of the poem. This piece of poetry is stunning and captivating, truly remarkable. There is so much feeling and emotion pored into each line and every single word; makes you think, I love when poetry makes you think that’s the best part about poetry the thought and feeling lingering in your head after words see now you know you did something right I’m ranting aren’t I? I just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed this write keep up writing well penned literature bravo! You should be proud. -
I completely agree with the message of this graet poem..you have worded a universal message here in this thoughtful poetry my friend..love it..well done..
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A wonderful tribute to the reality of pure and true LOVE!!! I really enjoyed reading this. The words you speak shine a precious light on the truth...thank you so much for sharing!!!
Blessings of love and peace to you dear heart!
Az
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This is a great poem as a whole, but some of the lines seemed choppy to me.
"No dragons, faries, ghosts or ghouls
Just freedom to live and break all the rules
It is love that I speak of, so pure and true
Love for myself and love for you"
These were great lines. These lines show great strength and self assurance.
Great job!
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Love, love, loved it!
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Loved it! My favourite part was the last line especially with the use of an old proverb "Love can set you free". It makes it easy for everyone to relate to on some level
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charming
a charming entry
very well written well done
especially liked
Love cannot shatter, love cannot break
Love can do wonders, love is not fake
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You have touched the tip of the iceberg here. Love is a feeling so strong and encompassing that it can wash away all other cares, and when you allow it to fill you, you will never be empty again. I like the fairytale part and the light rhyme.
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Excellent
Good topic, good voice, good flow, good rhyming (not perfect but acceptable). I REALLY LIKED IT . Kudos.
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so cute,
when love can make a bridge you started to build it, thank you for this entry, good luck
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Simple, short, and straight to the point. I like this piece. Although there were some spelling errors, I still think that this piece was well constructed, worded and the imagery you tried to slip in was good. Overall, I think this piece was well done. Great job.
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Awesome poem. Really like how you set love, a stereotypical fairytale element, to be a real life fairytale. Good rhyme and beat. Is this supposed to be a sonnett?
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