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dont say that

Here we go, you're running your mouth again
There we are I keep wondering when this pain will end
You say I didn't try, that it's all my fault
But you obviously don't know me at all

Don't you recognize the sacrifices I made for you
Did you not see the things I put myself through
I lost the friends I've had for years to help you
What the fuck else could I do

I walked away from sports and parties
'Cause you thought you needed me
I got grounded for sneaking out 'cause you were crying
Now you accuse me of not trying

What else did you want from me
All I did was give you everything
Or do you forget that time I got suspended from school
'Cause you thought pissing that boy off would be cool

Gal you meant so much
And I gave more than enough
And I defended you and stood up for you and cried for you
There was nothing that I wouldn't do

Don't point fingers unless it's in a mirror
It's not fair, and you cannot even hear
The hate that rings in your voice so loud
Making sure it carries through the crowd

I tried for you and I tried for us
But loving you just wasn't enough
It's not fair I get to shoulder all the blame
When I am also the only one shouldered with any pain

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ITS NOT FAIR WHEN YOU SAY I DIDNT TRY

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  • frozenblackpetals
    December 27, 2008

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    holy crap

    .... that was friggin awesome!!!!!!!! I can like, totally see your point of view and it fits with the quote PERFECT! I totally relate to this! i love the flow, and peoples ability to ryme just amazes me! Ohmigosh, i just adored this! thank you for entering!


    • HisFavoriteMistake
      December 27, 2008
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      lol damn gal that has got to be one of the most enthusiatic comments ive ever recieved lol im real glad you liked it. i thought it was a great quote, and im glad the results were to you likin

      • frozenblackpetals
        December 28, 2008
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        lol, thanks? XD. im a very enthusiastic person, ^^. I'm also very exited bout my first contest and wanted to appropiatly congragulate my contestents!
        good luck!