I've been a waiting for your phone call
it's a quarter after nine
baby you ain't called me
i'm slowly going out of my mind.
Seems like it's been forever
since i last heard from you
i know i said let's take it slow
i didn't know what else to do.
baby meet me in paris
i can't hardly wait to see
you in my arms again
there's no where else i want to be
you don't have to pack your bags
i have everything you need
baby if you love me please
meet me in paris tennessee.
we'll meet at that old cafe
where you always like to dine
we'll talk about old the days
when we were together all the time.
baby meet me in paris
i can't hardly wait to see
your sweet face again
it plays over in my memory.
you don't how bad i've missed you
i sure hoped you've missed me
baby if your lonely
meet me in paris tennessee.
A contest entry
- Titles, Pictures, Word bank, Story, and Quotes. Come look! by Missa.
650 points, ended January 1, 20 entries
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Sounds like a song...
It has some forced rhyme (dine, time, see, memory)
and a few line mess up the meter but other than that it's quite nice.
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Sweet poem - well rhymed and flowing, a longing for times gone by.
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Very sweet write here. I didn't know there was a Paris Tn. I like the flow and rhyme. Great job!
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Awww sweet! I like how you made it Paris tn instead of France. Good luck
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has anyone read this poem i put on here for a contest it's not usual writing for me but wanted something different..please tell me what you thin
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