Snow Angels

And as we fell together
Deep into the falling snow

Winter Quietly contained us
In our own frozen world

In a moment, sweet surrenders

Secretes kept between us both

we intended snow angels
But we got so much more

Just an imprint, noone would ever know

The only thing left of our kissing in the snow

Author notes

word prompt: kissing in the snow
56 words used (i know i went over 6 words i can change it if its a must)
i hope u like it

{#178} 50 words or less by daviscth. 400 points, ended January 5, 13 entries
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By me, right now

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daviscth
December 28, 2008
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I do like this a lot. Thank you for taking time to enter. The imagery is just beautiful.
YOtta
December 28, 2008
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How cute can a poem get!
am trying to think of more things to say but the only word present to my mind is DAMN CUTE !!!
A simple encounter filled with love and passion… cute passion ;P

enjoyed this piece to every falling snowflake!

G’luck in the contest