The tree of life
in palm of passion
spreads its fruit
far and wide
roots anchor deep
into soil of survival
as branches of history
create memories
that last forever
Author notes
picture prompt - www.anonymousspace.com
very fast thoughts....lol
30 words
A contest entry
- 12/30/30 Quickie by AngelKat42.
950 points, ended December 29, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good stuff
Great poem good message, love the imagery here and the thoughts behind it. you done a great job and are a talented poet . There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. And bully 4 u
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Thank you so much 'AAA Tuarus the Bull' for reading and for your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
best wishes
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This is a very beautiful 30 words my friend. The imagery is amazing. Congrats on winning a silver trophey.
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Thank you so much 'daviscth' for reading and your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
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Great Take
on the pix prompt! Glad you won a trophy for this! It's worthy! From beginning to end a noble write! It's not easy to pen a gripping poem in 30 words but you aced it!
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Thank you 'Kathleen....' for reading and your lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed this.
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Wonderful as always Sis...congrats on the Silver!
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Thanks Az - glad you enjoyed.
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Congrats on your silver. Very well deserved. Deep, and thought provoking poem!
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Thank you so much 'Hekate' - I am glad you enjoyed this.
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I adore your metaphors
they're so very clever
and poignant.
I love the way your write
Outstanding!!!
~Pastel
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Thank you so much 'Pastel...' for your lovely comment. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one.
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you know something for very fast thoughts, this is fantastic. wish my fast thoughts were this good.. but that's another story.. lol I personally love the second stanza the most. the imagery throughout this piece is excellent . I really really love the first two lines of the second stanza.
Excellent take on both your poem and the prompt
good luck
kat
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Thank you so much Kat - glad you liked this!
And thank you so much for the Silver!!!
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I clicked the link but it only took me to the website, not the pic you wrote on
... though this write stands without the need for a picture... great stuff, good luck in your contest
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Thank you 'Nom....' - glad you liked this.
No, the link is ????.....the picture is on the contest page (neat pic, go look!)......but she said to put the link under the pic, so that's what I did.....lolol
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Wow, for very fast thoughts this is excellent! I love how each line is so well linked to the next, creating a great flow! (I think that came out right
) Superb imagery. Very well penned hunni
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Thank you LadyD - glad you liked these fast thoughts. It's one I'll either edit and add more verses, or just delete....lol
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Another wonderful work on the prompt. I liked what I read in this! THANKS ABOOMER!!
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Thank you so much 'Pat...' for such a lovely comment - I am very pleased you enjoyed this fast write.
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This is a lovely take on the prompt indeed good luck to you in her contest best wishes always be well.
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thank you starz - glad you enjoyed.
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Oh this is very lovely
I like your take on the pic prompt.
A clever title to your poem.
Well done.
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Thank you so much 'Jesaan' for such a lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed these quick (very quick....lol) thoughts
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Great take on the picture.
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Thank you so much 'Sandra R. Reynolds' for reading and your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
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