Light poured in through dusty windows of my mind,
Warm to the touch and soul searching to find,
Searching out the soul in the dark,
Seeking the thoughts with smiles as their mark,
It finds treasures of sunny days,
Spent in a joyful haze,
Reaching the laughter of my stowed away life,
The breathless laughter that shatters the strife,
Oh this warm light is comfort giving,
This warm light is the life I'm living,
So I sit and bask in the never-ending sunshine,
Knowning that this light of love,
Is mine.
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welcome to allpoetry
this is a wonderful rather uplifting sorta write, I liked it, thanks for sharing this with us here and for joining the site, keep u p the writing,
cheers
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is beautiful. So delicate, and whimsical. It made me think of the days when you lie on the lounge and watch the dust particles dance on the rays of light coming in through the window.
Well written. I don't think the comma at the end of each line is necessary.
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