He walks into the room
Too soon.
I try to pull
Down my sleeve
Im too slow
He sees the marks
The smile drops
From his face
He walks over to me
Grabs me by the wrist
Pulls me up off the ground
And gives me a hug
He pulls back my sleeve
And traces the marks
His deep blue eyes
Look into mine
Almost laughing he says
How could you be so stupid hun?
Why-
Why would you do this?
I'm sorry.
I dont know.
Is all i can say
Dont be sorry
He says
Pulling back his own sleeve
Deep gashes...
Symbolize Pain
Symbolize Love
Symbolize Lies
Symbolize Being alone
Symbolize US.
Author notes
yeah its ramdom. but its the truth
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Comments
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Good write. I cannot leave much useful. I loved it.
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This is a deep penning full of thought provoking images.
Its written with great emotion.
Thanks for sharing and best of wishes to you.
Tony
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i am familiar with this topic, oh too well... and the last stanzsa speaks truth beyond mere knowledge... Great piece!
becca
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I love spider man... sorry.
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