Welcome to existance,
Welcome to resistance,
Welcome to hard times,
No one will hear your cries.
Welcome to the beginning of your end,
Going insane is the trend.
Welcome to your greatest fear,
No one can help you here.
You will see without a doubt,
What it is im talking about.
Welcome to that only place.
Where you will see that "hidden" face.
Welcome to demons,
Welcome to ghouls,
Welcome to that place where you won't see in school.
Welcome to broken promises,
They fuel all the land,
The powergrids, nooks and crannies,
'Cause there is always a task at hand.
Welcome to your thoughts,
Welcome to your dreams,
They may fool you one day,
But careful, they aren't what they seem.
The dreams are the worst,
All they are is lies,
Still don't know where we are?
Child, Welcome to your MIND.
Author notes
I haven't the slightest clue where that came from. But it came. And i feel better
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Interesting...
I wasn't very fond of the repetition, but as you said it's just something that came from nowhere, which you needed to get out, I'm not going to critique it ;
As that would be changing what YOU were thinking when you needed to get this poem out of your system, and I wouldn't do that -
thank you for sharing it with us
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Very well written And I like the style and the rhyme scheem was very good not forced.
Thank you for your entry good luck in the contest.
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Well written I like the rhyme scheme too.
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