From this quotation "Oh God ! please open your door and bless me your love...Unknown." came this piece of work. God bless.d
We stand before the door, our decision still fenced.
we are straddling it high middle,
Waiting for the correct wind
to make our choice without pretenses
But still, the door remains like a closed secret
for those who's self refuse His life.
Behind the door are blessings , and a rich new life,
love over flowing and bountiful springs of joy.
We must just be ready to accept Him as the One,
the Son of God, the Redeemer, our Salvation.
But still, the door remains like a closed secret
for those who's self refuse His life.
Truth is, He never shut the door and is waiting
for your heart to be placed into His. Simple thing.
You give God your heart and He gives you eternity.
Any locks on the door are only of our creation.
(C) Debby Sorensen Carlson
December 27 2008
A contest entry
- and bless me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 10, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Humm..there is a point and logic ..I agree with you dear friend..the door is not closed..maybe..it is our illusion..well said...
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Amen brother. Thank you. ! God Bless.Debby
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wonderful
what a true work of art.so perfectly witten and so spiritual am really looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future....But still, the door remains like a closed secret
for those who's self refuse His life is my favorite part of this piece...
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lanndubree
Thank you.. And God bless you all. Also, what a lovely picture .
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What imagery! I read it and had to stop myself. You really showed what you meant when you spoke about the closed door. Great job on this and good luck in the contest!
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Dancer
Thank you so much. Blessings. d
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Such a very true submission. It is just so. We all have his deliverance waiting for us as soon as we abandon self and reach out and accept what he offers.
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Rovingone
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and sincere comments. You understood this piece exactly. God bless. Debby
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