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Why did you go?

Why did you have to go, i thought we were made for eachother.
Out here forever. I loved you. But now i feel blue.
You must know i can't sleep without you next to me.
Can't you see i need you baby. When you left, i lost apart of me.
It is so hard to believe but i'm heartbroken. Without you i'm nothing.
It hurts so much that you're gone. We belong together. Hold me forever.
You said you wouldn't leave but you did. Whyy did you go?? I miss you baby come back please!!!

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  • StarIlluminated
    December 28, 2008
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    Awesome this is a cool poem. It definatly sounded like lyrics to me, so yeah it's very good


  • PaigeePerfectionx
    December 28, 2008
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    Thats a song isint it??