I am a girl with no label
A broken face, layed upon the table.
I am a girl lost in love,
Listen to me, help me from above.
I am a girl hurt so deep.
Heal me all over, the pains so steep.
I am girl begging for more
A greedy little bitch, I'm sure.
I am a girl who lives for one thing
Horseback riding on an angel without wings
I am a girl waiting to show her true self
So listen up kids, my hearts on the shelf.
Author notes
it started as a freewrite, but it ended up as a poem
Comments
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yay
i think it is good ! (: really deep . && i think people will like you even more if you do let that personality shine .

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Simply Beautiful...
A brilliant poem.
It shows a bit into the author's soul,
it lets the reader explore into the depths of how you see the world, it's a brilliant poem.
This is a really good write,
I wish i could rhyme when I write
oh well.
Keep writing!
~Annie Shadows


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wow i really like this peom i like how i see ur point of view but can maek it fit to my life an amazing job.
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great
very good rhyming!
it flows like water..



