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I am a girl

I am a girl with no label
A broken face, layed upon the table.

I am a girl lost in love,
Listen to me, help me from above.

I am a girl hurt so deep.
Heal me all over, the pains so steep.

I am girl begging for more
A greedy little bitch, I'm sure.

I am a girl who lives for one thing
Horseback riding on an angel without wings

I am a girl waiting to show her true self
So listen up kids, my hearts on the shelf.

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it started as a freewrite, but it ended up as a poem

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  • joee-143
    January 19

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    yay

    i think it is good ! (: really deep . && i think people will like you even more if you do let that personality shine .

  • Simply Beautiful...

    A brilliant poem.
    It shows a bit into the author's soul,
    it lets the reader explore into the depths of how you see the world, it's a brilliant poem.
    This is a really good write,
    I wish i could rhyme when I write
    oh well.

    Keep writing!
    ~Annie Shadows

  • haili
    January 12

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    wow i really like this peom i like how i see ur point of view but can maek it fit to my life an amazing job.

  • great

    very good rhyming!
    it flows like water..