I am so hurt, there was this one boy out there.
i can't believe i let him go. I wish i could go back
and put things right. Every night i find it hard to sleep
cos i know you're never there no more to hold me all through
the night. I wish i could make everything right. I made us both
hurt and i am so sorry. If i could ever make it up to you let me know.
Just remember all those times when we kissed, remember when we hugged?
I know you could find a place in your heart for me, i felt so free.
I wanna make everything better for you. I can't believe i made myself
pain. But you did the pain too didn't you, i would always forgive you.
Can you forgive me, guess we'll soon see. But you gotta understand that now im giving you my hand. I love you dear, wish you were near. Im so hurt.
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Deadicated to my ex.
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Very dep write here
If this is true about someone you know and being you are twelve please listen closely if you want to remain friends and never have such sorrows again . You must try to be the best friends you can be and care for one another and love as friends but keep it there for to go further and to find minds change at this age the pain would be tto great .But to remain best friends untill you are out of school if this person cares for you even then you have saved your heart for him . Please so many young people are falling into love far too young and finding themselves lone and often with a child to raise by themselves . Even if this person is a few years older it never works out for if a young man takes a girl at twelve he is not someone you would want to spend your life with for he has no respect and cares not about the child before him . Please save yourself from this heart ache and pain for even the adults at times cant handle the scars left behind
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