My hands groping in the fog.
Thick like pea soup
(Rudolph was right).
I'm trying to find you
Because I know that you are lost
In this blizzard.
It's so dark
And makes me choke
And stings my eyes.
I know that you're lost
And I'm trying to find you.
But the problem is that
I'm lost, too.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt III by Itzamna.
550 points, ended December 30, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well done. Short and sweet.
Happy trails.

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Very well. I like it.
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excellent poem, i especially loved the last stanza. great job and good luck!
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Beautiful! ;D I love it! Great write! ^-^





