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An Acrostic

Inevitably swallowed by
This grotesque
Slithering serpant

Monstrously
Evil thing
.

How do I
Escape? It's
Looming
Perpetually

Perhaps I'll
Let it
Eat it's fill
And not worry,
Suffer
Ever again
!

Author notes

Animal I Have Become- three days grace

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  • skilter
    September 13, 2009
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    interesting, thankyou for entering!


  • skye101
    December 27, 2008

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    i liked the poem. great write. the imagery in the begining sounded awesome. silthering serpant. good line.


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    December 27, 2008
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    i like this, i think it was written really well.
    Great write.
    Laura.