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Leona & Lacey

Love answers at angels' first calL
Engulfed the heart in burning aurA
Overflows the mind in loving toxiC
Neverending flow of desire so purE
Always within souls shall you staY

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A double acrostic, the first and the last letters of every sentance spell out the names of two very lovely ladies. May their lives be filled with peace and happyness.

~Darc Raven, the Bard of Old

 

 

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  • AliceinWonderpants
    October 4
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    this is beautiful, so creative and powerful!
    good job!
    x


  • sinfull
    September 27

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    A creative take on the acrostic. The presentation is appealing and stands out. This post speaks well of your poetry and creativity. Kudos


  • kylierenea
    August 18

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    Very creative

    So cute, but so sad. You did a great job on this poem, it must have been hard! Keep up the good work and thanks for entering my contest


  • Eavan Max
    July 23
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    Two very lucky ladies. This is a very beautiful write. I really like it a lot. The double acrostic had to of taken some work. I find it so cool. The background is a tad bit distracting though


  • hisaddiction
    July 2
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    I absolutely love this!


  • Queen of Death
    February 20
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    This is a truely wonderful poem. They are very lucky ladies. Hope that you never let them go for I am sure they will never betray you. Great writtings. Very well written I love how you did the doubleaccrostic.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 9

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    beautiful imagery thanks for entering! The format of the colouring though is a bit hard on the eyes.


  • ChelseySmile
    December 29, 2008
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    Wow. A double acrostic.
    I love this poem, how it's written.
    It's word-art.

    I also like the colour scheme.


  • condor gold member
    December 29, 2008

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    I've read acrostics before, but i have never seen anyone do a double acrostic, and you did it so well and with dedication to two of your beautiful friends. Ingenious! I don't think i would have ever thought of that. Top marks! The very best of luck in the contest.


    • Darc Raven
      December 29, 2008
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      I am glad it meets your aproval. These two lovely ladies are very wonderful people and great inspirations.


  • Angelflower
    December 28, 2008
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    bravo dear. A wonderful write as always


  • Tirrell
    December 28, 2008

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    A lovely double acrostic, sweetly woven with charming imagery
    and nicely paced with a smoothe flow.


  • Wingsy
    December 27, 2008

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    Awww, thanks darc. That was vary good and vary well done. was vary touching also. I really liked this and loved the thought that went into it!

    thanks hon, and you know I'll always be there for you. Its what i was put here for.


  • Lucian Valcor
    December 27, 2008

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    nice dude ive never really thought of writing like this good idea, hey nice to have you back on the site man

    Lucian"


  • PANDAmonium
    December 27, 2008

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    Darc, it has been forever and a day since last we spoke. Yet you're still a great poet. I'm glad my fellow Bard is back. by the way, you spelt Aura wrong.

    -Justin

    • Darc Raven
      December 28, 2008
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      it has been ages sense we spoke my brother. its good to hear from you. and you know i always spell something wrong


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    Darc Thank you so much for this it gives my heart a real lift. You know what you are to me and to Lacey. *smiles happily* THANK YOU

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