Saw in the Walmarts
just the other day,
where a dog went shopping
quite a display.
The automatic doors,
made it easy you see.
For the new age shopper,
to enter at ease.
He waltzed right in,
and sniffed along the isles.
And before anyone knew it,
that dog had a smile.
On his way out,
with dog bone in wrapper .
He became the new shop lifter,
and out burst the laughter.
For he was so cool ,
for he had found the perfect gift .
And it was Christmas you know,
and gave him the perfect lift.
They never found this
four legged thief,
He is off somewhere
enjoying his feast.
So God Bless the critters,
who has found a way.
To treat themselves to a Christmas bone,
on this special day.
Author notes
Hope you like it
A contest entry
- Rap (Not quite music and not quite poetry, but who cares) by Shya.
1350 points, ended January 10, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The dog was lucky
He got away with out a whack or cop call. Personally i call this place the "Dictator Store." They used to carry a lot , as the brands began to drop,
more non-American things flew. Now they basicly tell you what you can buy.
Not your brand but the brand from the what ever weird brand. Where is that dog, maybe he could haul out a lot more, so we could have a better brands...mac
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aww - this is so cute! Lovely wording and rhyme in this made it a pleasure to read.
I love the picture you've painted of the little dog just going through the doors at Walmart - and helping himself to a gift-wrapped bone for christmas!
best wishes in your contest
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I love the imagery your words painted. I could just see this little doggy with his doggie grin. Good luck in the contest.
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SO CUTE!!!!!
I can just see a dog grabbing a doggie bone and running out the door
That would get people to laugh!
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This is so cute Stories. I can just see this little dog doing just as your poem states. Pure delight. Good luck in the contest.
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Brilliant!! The Lord helps them that help themselves. Animals are so wonderful arn't they.. Good luck with this one...mal
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Oh goodness! I love this! It sure brought a laugh and smile to me! What a great job! I could see it all happening... That is great!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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