“Crucify me already”
he pleads.
And to his moans
she kneels before him and feeds.
Flesh meshes enticement
and she teases
even though devolic
she caresses and pleases.
Her tail a whip
It wriggles and slips
a smack upon filthy skin
drips bloody drops of crimson sin
she grins
Lie mute
You manwhore
no words of yours matter
your voice no longer flatters
Squirming to be freed
You scandalous seed
you’ll pay for your conceit
I'll degrade you
until you beg for dear death
suffocating beneath your own
foul breath
There’s no repose in happiness
I condemn you
a life of bitterness
supplied by the chaos
of quid pro quo
Don’t look at me
don’t you dare
and pathetically stare
taste the fruit of
humiliation and despair
She licks her lips
as she sinks her nails
upon naked flesh and sips
Sips ever so yearningly
the tainted life
of her whorish puppet
until drained and hollow
She adds him to her collection
of chauvinist Muppets.
Author notes
Picture Prompt Contest....
I guess theres a twist, one word is lingering through my mind... R.E.V.E.N.G.E !!!!
A contest entry
- Quick Pic by lunarlunacy.
400 points, ended January 12, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dirty Pretty Writes by KelsiEvermore.
400 points, ended May 25, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Is she a vampire? Just a thought that came around at the end of your poem. I loved the beginning: "crucify me already".
If the word revenge is lingering through YOUR mind, does that mean someone pissed you off? Haha, or was the word just there? I miss you.
Now... I really loved this poem. I loved the dark and chaotic atmosphere of this entire piece, and I loved the format of your poem. I bet if you placed it all to the left, it would not have had the same vibe. But it would of still been beautiful. Just like you.
Bri~
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Very well written. I loved it.
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excellent eally great work.
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hey congrats on the trophy here. This is a very good write with lots of imagery going on. Reminds me of a vampire write. Am I close?
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lol... well, I wasn’t depicting a vampire scenario while I was writing this poem; however, let me just say i had very very evil thoughts!
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Eep...there is this eerie miasma hanging down from each line. You are a master of dark poetry. A poetic virtuoso. Well done.
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This is without a doubt
One of the most beautifully constructed dark writes ever done. You nail him down,thrust taunting beauty at the beast, take delight in his powerlessness, you add pain, reject his pleas, drink his life and hang him hollow beside the majority of suitors before him. I am once again, speechless~
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wow, you do darkwrite with a undeniable flair. good to see ya around again Yotta, and thanks for sharing. Feel sorry for that ex of yours cuz if words could kill...
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very very very passionate and forceful...i like the idea...and your treatment is wonderful, hun
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woah... ... ... umm that sick and twisted revenge.. damn gurl where do u get this from?
dark and very intense imagenary
its amazing good luck with the contest
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