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all that jazz...

I want your lovesong...

it's music to my ears
as your gasps and moans
and all that jazz...
escape from your lips

the ooh-ahh sounds
in whispers or as you
belt them to me loudy
and you call me baby...

I want to hear them echo
inside this room, our stage...

whenever I
stroke your body
with my fingertips
and as you feel
the warmth of my mouth
on your skin
when I kiss you...
from the stubbles
on your chin

the breathing on your chest
the throb of your heartbeats
the pursed air on my lips

blend in slow and fast rhythms

now I am just warming you up
we have all night

let our music up some more
'til we reach a moment's hush...


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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    January 3

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    Amazing piece to present to a lover, you have done a great job with this
    Thankyou and best of luck

  • Rambunctious
    December 28, 2008

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    How I loved this write, with all its jazz. It is a poem to dance to, then to love over.
    I love the softness of your write, the feelings behind the music...

    SensualD