Give me a chance and i'll make it up to you,
one last chance is all i ask,
i won't do anything you wouldn't do,
just give me a chance.
Give me a chance to better myself,
i know i've been useless in the past,
this time i'll make things right
this time i'll make things last.
Give me a chance to show you i love you,
whatever your command,
i'll go ahead and do,
i'll take you to the beach,
hold you tight in my arms
and i'll never let you out of my reach,
just give me a chance.
A contest entry
- prewrites round contest #1 by serenity silvermoon.
425 points, ended December 27, 2008, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So sweet here and loving, asking for that person's forgiveness, to star once again as both of your heart heals...


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DEEPLY TOUCHING!!!!
Just keep the dream alive and it will come true!
's Very deep and loving thoughts! Keep this in your heart and believe!
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