I’ve made a few choices I’ve come to regret,
causing me pain that I’d like to forget.
The best two decisions, I’ve made in my life...
Christ as my Savior, and You as my Wife.
Author notes
I wrote this for my bride on our first anniversary, just a few years ago. picture by: me.
copyright, Kevin Pace, WordsDoMatter.com
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& I bet it brought a tear to her eye
lovely
mia
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AMEN! Good work on this prompt and message Kevin! My best to you in the contest!
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thanks
for the "AMEN", that's the first one I've gotten here... and I like it! - Kevin
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a very good poem that is wisely written..Two choices Ive made.Christ as my Savior adn You as my Wife....
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Oops!
Oops. I forgot the clappies.
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A Pleasure to read
You my friend are a true poet with a heart of gold. This is one of the most beautiful and meaningful short poems I have ever had the pleasure to read. The two of whom you speak must smile at you everyday with a great love in their heart for you. I know Jesus is and your wife must also. You are both so lucky to have found the love we all look for, not only the love of a soulmate, but the love our Saviour has for us all. May God Bless you my friend. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain -
This is short and sweet and absolutely beautiful!
What a lovely gift for your wife, that you now share with two others about to embark on the wonderful journey together.
Best of luck in the contest.
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thanks
for your heartfelt response, I appreciate it - Kevin
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How sweet! This is truly a wonderful read! I hope my son and his wife to be will like it as much as I did!
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