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Life

sadness
brings life to heart
awakening pained thoughts
like rose thorn pricks dripping of blood
blending  

 





 

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A Cinquain

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  • FransB gold member
    January 2
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    Glad

    you liked it. Frans


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    January 2

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    Oh!

    So much told in so few words in such a great form! Yes, without the sadness we really can't appreciate the beauty of life. Your use of the rose as a metaphor for life brings this out beautifully! The word blending is the perfect ending.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    Pin pricks printing sadness on the page...

    Will the next "Life" lines be of happiness?


    • FransB gold member
      January 2
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      Thanks,

      yes, I will try to combine the theme as a 'chain'. Frans