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Dark

In every dark cell
and every corner
where I have been
where I dug
You find the imprint of
what I had to leave
a stone that's fallen
from my back,
a weight so large
that I am glad I set it free.

And if you find
that special piece
which I have lost
in shadows
in arms
in haste
or in need--
you'll know my name
know who I was
and who I am
and you and me.

But then again
In every dark
and cornered street
and in the flesh
in hate
in breed
distinctive, unique
I left my fear
that you will find
the reason why
the real me.

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  • nilav
    January 10
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    this is the real fingerprint of the poet or anyone else....enjoyed it...good luck in the contest


  • funpum
    January 10
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    Ooooh

    This is gooood. Hope you lose that weight soon, if this is autobiographical.


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    December 31, 2008

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    Great write...

    Reflective & profound in its honesty...
    Compelling narrative with a delightfully dark undertone that captivates throughout...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well penned, well versed, well done!!!


  • maralisa silver member
    December 30, 2008
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    a nice poem good luck inthe contestmaralisa