Here I am,
I feel you stare.
You lift no finger for me
But still you watch.
Who are you?
A guardian angel?
Or maybe some heavenly journalist?
But, if that is so,
Why is my story worth so much coverage?
Whoever you are
You never left me.
When I was volatile or calm,
When I knew I had to leave,
When I took the wrong road.
I've turned around now
Chosen not to cross the rocks
But to use the bridge instead.
Are you still staring?
You watched me fall
Now watch me stand
Author notes
I'm still trying to work out what it's about lol
A contest entry
- It's time for a..... Song Contest! by misshugglebugglez.
700 points, ended January 21, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
needs some work but what do you think so far?? :P
Comments
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"you watched me fall. now watch me stand". powerful lines. also loved the "Or maybe some heavenly journalist?" line.
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i liked it! it seemed really cool! =) my fave part of the ultra fabulousness:Who are you?
A guardian angel?
Or maybe some heavenly journalist?
But, if that is so,
Why is my story worth so much coverage?
Whoever you are
You never left me.
i thought this was great! nice work! happy holidays and good luck, huggggggggs,
-adria/ confuzzled- angel
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hello! ur song lyric prompt will be Stop and Stare by One Republic! yay! i love that song! go to: http://www.metrolyrics.com/stop-stare-lyrics-onerepublic.html for the lyrics =D
have fun!
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