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Spread the love

All across the land,
children are sleeping,
through the quicksilver,
air frost lay bare,

while box's of love,

are prepared with care,

as we celebrate the joy

Christmas cheer,

to open the doors for,

a happy new year,

we will never have,

peace on earth for all,

but we can share our,

love where ever we,

we roam especially,

to those close at home.

 

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  • chilali
    December 30, 2008
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    One word. Beautiful.


  • The Poetic Angel
    December 28, 2008

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    Beautiful ...

    while box's of love,
    are prepared with care,

    good luck in the contest

    xx ju xx


  • Desire gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    Precious~

    Love the message You have penned- Powerful and gives much for the reader to think about-
    Adore the phrase- through the quicksilver
    Bravo!!
    Wish more would share this enthusiasm- and spread the Hoiday cheer~ make that an everyday agreement instead of just once a year
    Excellent this is!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    excellent~

    A beautiful holiday poem
    Love it
    Best of luck in the contest
    It's a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • nichtmich silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    Maralisa, this is a beautiful poem about Christmas as it should be. Your rhyme and simplicity of expression rings loud and clear to those who get caught up in the frenzy of the unimportant details of the season. I have to suspect that you made this background too. Soooo tranquil and heart lifting. Kudos you lady, I AM impressed! Thank you!


  • oceanbluize
    December 27, 2008

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    this is a wonderful rendition of holiday poem. i love the idea behind this beautiful poem...this should do well in the contest...best of luck!
    love and serenity bestowed on you,
    ocean.


  • lindaburns gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    Never say never. Maybe we won’t have
    peace on the whole earth, but maybe
    the peace we make in our own homes
    will spread to our friends and our
    co-workers…etc. Which is exactly
    what your poem says. Good work.
    Linda


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    Aww such a beautiful little piece, well penned hunni, good luck


  • penman gold member
    December 27, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    this is a beautiful poem that you've written sissy. I love it. the imagery is excellent.

    good luck
    kat

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