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birds on the wire

city dwelling
constantly self defeating
burried beneath the snow
holds young mens' eagerness cold

the ways she turns away
left me hanging
with all the other birds on the wire
waiting to be influenced and inspired








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  • Matt Holck
    December 28, 2008
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    strung on a line waiting to have reason for flight


    • onthesly
      December 29, 2008
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      That's how I'm feeling these days. I don't know what I am waiting for.


      • Matt Holck
        December 29, 2008
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        to be rescued?

        remind me of the final song in the muppet movie

        "It starts when we're kids, a show-off in school;
        Makin' faces at friends, you're a clown and a fool.
        Doin' prat-falls and bird-calls and bad imitations;
        Ignoring your homework, now that's dedication.
        You work to the mirror, you're getting standing ovations.
        You're burning with hope, you're building up steam.
        What was once juvenilish is grown-up and stylish,
        You're close to your dream.
        Then somebody out there loves you,
        Stands up and hollers for more;
        You found a home at the Magic Store."

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