My heart will tiptoe through forever just to be with you
if you my love ever left, i don't know what i'd do
lock the door that holds two hearts crying for a beat
hold me close and fly with me, lift me off my feet
you take the darkest moments and turn them into bright
baby take my hand and lay with me tonight
teardrops on the desk remembering the pain
you left him broken hearted and now he's back again
leaving with a smile but feeling so damn blue
talking to another wishing it was you
he holds you and it hurts, you kiss him and i cry
i wrote your name in my heart so these feelings wouldn't die
three balloons are flying each one has a heart
i know it isn't easy baby and you feel your ripped apart
i will be your secret that you keep so true
shh..don't tell a soul that my heart belongs to you.
Author notes
Have you ever been in love with or liked someone who is taken?
This another about my forbidden love. hmmm..xx aw.
The situation i had with Mairead, was that she had a boyfriend, but she was in love with me. and she couldn't make a choice because she felt that her and her bf had been together to long to break it off..
No one wanted mairead and i to be together..thats why it was a secret.
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...not anymore muahahaha. xx
A contest entry
- Give me hope by Tiffany Turner.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Right or wrong - I think I still love you. (Forbidden love) by fake-or-real-smile.
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thank you for sharing this write with me. i wish you the best of luck in this contest that we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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Wow this was really good.
I love the lines:
"i wrote your name in my heart so these feelings wouldn't die
three balloons are flying each one has a heart"
and
"i will be your secret that you keep so true
shh..don't tell a soul that my heart belongs to you."
Fantastic poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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great write....thank you for entering my contest...good luck...and keep up the great work
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So deep and thoughtful. Absolutely lovely and it just hits home so hard with almost everyone in almost every relationship. Probably one of the best poems out there and the most understood.
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My heart will tiptoe through forever
brilliant line! Looooved it.
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freaking effinggg exelent
kay this poem however is deffanately a favourite i mean the wording is impecable and wow .. awww it has so much meaning dang its a powerful poem, i loved loved loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeddd ittt babeeee <333 wowzieeeeeee deffanatelyyyy rating you highestt !
x-Char.
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