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Just a little bit of Hope

All this life has ever given me was heartache
nothing but do this and do that and be someone you are not
Every chance I took to try love it took my heart and carved more intials
of forgotten love into it without a second thought.
But here with you I feel a bit of hope, something I thought had died so long ago and you know even though I was once afraid I fear nothing now in your arms.
Here, oh god here with you I feel nothing but trust and love and I remember what it meant to once upon a time to be happy with someone.
I suffered so long under the shadow of my own desperation but not now, not anymore. You have become my light here in this darkness, and even in the night when we lay in one anothers arms I feel nothing but real love, strong love, comfortable love.
That is worth everything to me, because I know, I know this time with you I won't need to be afraid ever again. Sweetest love I know never to be afraid again.

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  • geckogirl silver member
    March 10
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    nice words, every one needs a little bit of hope. keep smiling


    • EternalFyre
      March 10
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      Thank you and it is good to have hope. I have my Lee to thank for giving me hope.


  • Mandapanda89
    March 9
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    Awwwe

    i like that is so sweet
    i wish that is still how i felt


  • Dr.Lei
    January 4
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    wow

    I'm at a loss for words


  • BrokenSanity
    December 27, 2008

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    wow, ver powerful piece here. I like it. It reflects the pain and price that every lover must one day pay. Well done poet!


  • Xx-AxSinglexTear-xX
    December 27, 2008
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    Very well written.
    Great job ..

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