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You Must Remember,

the mad race of cars trying to beat the rising water.
the illegal drag races on South Galvez St.
people on rooftops waving to attract the attention of helicopters.
the colorful attention getting umbrellas waved by dancers at a secondline.
hordes with raised hands calling for water.
the "you bring the whiskey, I got the wine",
"throw me sumthin' mister" raised hands of Mardi Gras.
the haz-mat suits.
that every year the Indians make a new suit.
the smell of mold, mildew, stagnant water and stinking refrigerators.
French bread baking on M.L.King Blvd., beignets,red beans & rice,

coffee with chicory.
the caravan of military vehicles.
the train ride through City Park for Christmas In The Oaks.
the silence.
the door-popping gossips shouting more news than action reporter.
the darkness.
the lights of Canal St., the lit up Crescent City Connection,
the church with the huge lighted cross on it's wall.
the curfew.
the city that never sleeps.
weeds taking over once manicured lawns.
Longview Gardens, azaleas blooming up and down St.Charles Ave.
and God's smiling miracles, the sunflower fields springing up all over town

in the most unlikely places after Katrina.
the sad quiet faces.
the where y'at?,  s'hapnin'?,  how ya mama nem?,
holla at me whoady!, loud smiling who dat fans.
the president who didn't know what to do.
our mayor Ray Nagin who "handled his bizness'.
the unfamiliar faces of CNN.
WWL, Sally Ann and our favorite goofball Eric.
us being shipped all over the United States.
not to forget,

there's no place like home.
we don't have ruby slippers but,

the spirit of New Orleans brings us back

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    August 29

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    Wow this is quite an intruiging piece here almost like something you would expect to read from a reporter as others have said. Quite an interesting style. Best to you fine poet


  • Jillosophy
    August 29
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    Beautifully evocative write. You paint loud word pictures. The only hitch...? Did you mean "quite" or "quiet"? Lovely peice.

    jill


  • A.a.p
    August 28
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    Brilliant write.... hmm made me travel in respect


  • Ellis gold member
    August 14
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    You should be working for WWL, have your own show, or be a reporter for the newspaper.


  • WuzGood
    July 12
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    Wow, great write, i love it!!

  • Wisdom 1
    July 9
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    niCE

    You are so much in love with New Orleans and it reflects so much in your writingsm keep penning.


  • lifereaper
    July 3
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    very beautifull,can't imagine the emotion involved,thanks for putting words to emotion.


  • Melodies
    June 10

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    HOODWINK!

    Really dipped into the richness of New Orleans here in your fine poem, good Poet! Yes, the spirit of a vital city lives on and can't be put away.


  • AllexisReed
    June 10

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    I know I said not to say "powerful or imagery" but girl this is packed with power and I can see the streets and places you are talking about. I wasn't there, but I feel it in your words. Great piece!

  • omg I LOVE THIS it is just packed with power and imagery that reaches out and leads me, seriously this is awesome
    thanks so much
    T

  • One could feel the anguish, the despair in these lines, leaving home in such a moment of tragedy is heart breaking and should never really happen in this modern day and age.

    I so enjoyed the read even if it is somewaht sad in terms of content.

    Home is home but my childhood home was destroyed in the 1980 earthquake in southern italy and it was never rebuilt.


  • LiMarie silver member
    April 25

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    It's been a dream of mine forever to visit New Orleans and I've not made it yet,thank you for letting me smell it see it feel it here..


  • WisdomWarrior
    April 23
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    Yes! Yes!

    We must never forget!! Great imagery here! Always remind people so that if the appeal for humanity does not work, perhaps the annoyance of repetition will!

    Loved this.

    I wrote a poem on the whole Katrina incident but not with the detail that you did.

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2032188

    Thank you for sharing this poem and thank you for your thoughtful comments on my pieces.

    One Love,

    John

  • You've written two poems on the Katrina subject haven't you? It seems like it's a subject that hits pretty close to home. I know I was pretty sad about the whole issue too. It was so devastating. I loved the way you wrote this one though. It has such beautiful visuals that I feel like I can just feel the cities heartbeat. I think this is my favorite poem of yours so far.

  • Strangedaze
    April 3
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    I simply can't imagine

    the pain and the courage and the spirit that must have been displayed. Of course, like the rest of us who weren't there, I could only watch in wonder at the visuals on TV. The tragedy only became more evident with the "Good job, Brownie" remark. What planet was he watching from? You should really write a book about your experiences. I'll be first in line to read it.


  • FaeRae gold member
    March 26

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    This should have been a gold. New Orleans is my favorite place outside of home in the whole world and I loved the way you captured both the good and the bad. I love the multi-culture there, the good-can't-can't-get-me-down spirit, the ringing of trolley bells (the ride itself), Mardi Gras, Halloween, The Jax, beads by the score (I have a box), the parades, the ghosts. There is just no other place like this city. If one hasn't been-they haven't lived. After Katrina, well, this girl put off her every two year visit. You convinced me in this poem to come back this year. Too late for Mardi Gras, but the first time I went was in the middle of September and I fell in LOVE. Thank you for reminding me of the magic.
    Blessed Be,
    Rae


  • CrystalLizard
    March 20

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    I love the way you've mixed the images—New Orleans whole and vibrant, and battered and broken after the storm, and then back again. It's very powerful and heart-wrenching, and all the better for its lack of analysis. Bravo!


  • bigperm
    March 5

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    This is such an emotional write

    I can only imagine what that feeling of loss is like. I love Atlanta, I don't even like the minor changes we have to endure. To loose an entire history...a culture.Tragic. I always did like New Orleans. The worst thing is that now, as the construction resumes, the property is so expensive that the average person can not even return if they wanted to. Talk about insult to injury. My thoughts are with you. Thanks for sharing Ms. Doreatha.


  • DeeDee
    January 7
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    Fabulous!

    This was a great read. A person not only see's the devastation through your words but you have allowed us the ability to taste and smell it as well. This is remarkable, a great write. I loved "we don't have ruby slippers but, the spirit of New Orleans brings us back." Without spirit, there is nothing.
    Spirit brings hope......


  • Patpowers silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    Welcome to A.P. As I was reading this Dorothea, it reminds all of us of the horrors from Katrina in 2005. It is almost like yesterday as I glanced at this. I thought this was a touching piece of poetry and worth every word. THANKS!

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