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What The Eyes Can See

Its funny how we grow
Its funny how we change
Its funny how life shows
You so many different things

I used to think you were lame
I thought I was so cool
I called you so many names
All the way through school

Now here we are
Standing here today
Holding you in my arms
So much I wish I could erase

The love of my life
Beauty beyond years
Undeserving to call you my wife
But so blessed to have you here

So cruel I used to be
How many nights you must have cried
Lord knows I would give anything
To take back just one of those nights

Your inocence so pure
Your love for life so bold
If one thing i know for sure
Your heart is etched in gold

To forgive me for who I was
And to have faith in who I can be
Shows me that love
Is more than what the eyes can see








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  • Abstract Image
    March 12
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    Beautiful words you have here and i know lots of people can relate...GL


  • Ignis Corpus
    January 9

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    Awe this is cute, but you need to put the options in your authors note. Also use puctuation correctly and captialization a little less such as the beginning of the lines. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.

    Ignis Corpus


  • irdefk
    December 27, 2008
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    awwww it's cute!! thank you for entering.