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shine

Winds so whispers

Of silent things

Subtle gestures

Calm may bring

Distant thunders

Fade to dim

Blue skies plunder

Clouds soft white skin

To the horizon’s

Robust sun

Gallant rising

A new days' come...

c2008 vduna

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  • DogFish silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    I'm stunned!
    A glimmer of light has found a crack in the night onto your poetry, "8"!

    A grand portrait of heavenly awe!


  • Patpowers silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    This one shined on for the visual expression you put into this Vic! Nice effort!