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Tiny Things Unseen

 

 

 

 



There are 
 very tiny things 
we do not see. 
These are 
childrens eyes 
when they sleep, 
angels 
when we 
are awake, 
and love when we are neither.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    June 19

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    Here's another one you can re-post towards the front of your work, Danny. I think it should be given a more proper place at a spot where it might be seen by your readers. I especially loved the ending of it. Your talent is a luminous, palpable thing. I feel its reverberations daily, you know.