You say you want a revolution.
You gasp it out of your breathing-breath,
you say you need to change your world around.
You say you need to overthrow your master
and dig the noose out of your neck,
but I cannot see those nails
burning away binding fibers-
I see your denial.
There is no way up and so much down,
but when right and left
have no street anymore,
and there is no more direction
on your hungry compass,
you have no cause, you're
just a rebel with a joint
and someone else's free ride.
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Really Nice
I really like this piece and i am actually using it in my poetry analysis class! -
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"You say" being repetitive is unnecessary. I am also confused by the second line "breathing-breath"
This is a great piece, it shows confusion and truth and plain honesty.
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