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I am Three Women

I am three women.
I play two parts well.
I am a teacher and a daughter.
It is the secret me that is my shame.

I hear the bell ring.
Eager to please.
Enforse the Golden Rule.
I whisper to myself,
"I know why I was born."

After school, I run home.
First things first,
I call my mother.
We talk for hours.
I will always be there for her.

Now I am alone, alone with my shame.
I am dirty, useless, untouchable.
I feel alone, rejected.
I am dying.
I have HIV.

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  • kdom
    April 14
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    The last verse tore my heart out.


  • Shrat
    December 27, 2008
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    Wow. When I started this, it kept my mind reeling at what the third life could be. That was not one of the possibilities. Great job. You kept the reader thinking about the poem through reading it, and then resolved it in a way that keeps the reader thinking about it.


  • DiscardedHope
    December 27, 2008
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    Wow, that is so moving!
    The last verse is so sad, i started to cry!

    Good luck!