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I Don't Love You

I Don’t Love You
I loved you more than you’ll ever know,
You even said that you loved me too,
I used to cry,
While praying to God to not let you go,
To tell me how to make you stay
But you left,
And I don’t want anything to do with you,
You said that you didn’t love me anymore,
And you cast me aside like what we had meant nothing to you,
Well I don’t love you anymore.
So get out,
Dry your eyes,
Take all the memories that you’ve left me with
Because I would prefer to forget that I even knew you
And give me back all the love that I selflessly gave you,
Because you don’t deserve any of it
You destroyed me,
Until I didn’t even know who I was anymore
“So fix your eyes and get out!”
Because I don’t love you..
Like I did,
Yesterday



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  • NeverSayAddiction
    December 27, 2008
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    Nice...

    other then the taking of lyrics, you did well... Thanks for the entry...


  • Neon Lights
    December 27, 2008

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    Good job Jenn! It's sooo sad, yet empowering at the same time. If only everyone could get over the one they loved so easily!


    • Jane Eyre
      December 27, 2008
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      Oh thank you Fiona!! It was actually quite liberating to write, in a sense. Because I thought that I loved him, but didn't like him, but now I don't love him at all! Huzzah!


      • Neon Lights
        December 28, 2008
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        Good for you! People shouldn't be able to have that kind of hold on you, and make you feel that way!