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just another tearful filled poem

Lyrics of the heart go unsung
Words of the mind go unsaid
As we fall deeper into confusion
Because its just so damn hard to talk
To you
Every word I say gets turned around
And before I know it up looks like down
We agree, for awhile
But the same problems lay hidden—day after day
I don’t know where its safe to step anymore
It all seems like a trap--that I just might break
‘Cause it’s what makes up the ocean
That keeps me from you
And who knows what keeps you from me

…It’s just another tearful song of pain and questions
wondering why love has to be so god damn hard…

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  • Dovina
    January 2
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    I love your last line the best:

    …It’s just another tearful song of pain and questions
    wondering why love has to be so god damn hard…

    truly, when we go through life, this question always hits us. Why do things have to be so hard and confusing all the time?

    thanks for your entry

  • XmmusicXloverrX
    December 26, 2008
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    this was soooooo good. ur an excellent poet. good job, cant wait to read more of ur poems!