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well, it's a little to late

you all turn against me
when the going get tough
when it's all over
you invite me back with nothing but love

isn't it simple
can't you see
i don't need
you people in me

i don't need to hear
what you have to say
you comments
your lies
i'll just push them away

you say you love me
  - another lie

you say you care
- i'm not falling for it this time

"i'm sorry", you said
well, it a little to late


your chance for your grand-baby back
just slipped away

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  • fangs to blame
    January 6

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    "i don't need to hear
    what you have to say
    you comments
    your lies
    i'll just push them away"

    Very touching and emotional i enjoyed this one. (:


  • cutiepiekiller
    January 1
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    HEYHEYYYY , dude , nice job , nerd : )


  • Zerstort
    December 31, 2008

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    The last two lines of this poem make this poem extremely personal. I like it. No criticisms.

    --Aden